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Colleges sometimes require a personal statement as part of their admission process. Even if not required, a personal essay included with one's application may enhance a student's opportunity for admission.

Think about the following:

"How am I unique?"

Colleges want to know what makes you a unique individual. Your personal statement or essay takes a factual record and turns it into a "human being." When the admissions committee is undecided, this is your tie breaker!

Think about who you are, where you are needed, and why.

  • Consult with teachers and your counselor for form and content.

  • Don't rehash a record listed elsewhere, grades, etc.

  • Be creative and original but never gimmicky.

  • Be specific in detail; anecdotes help greatly.

  • Don't write a travelogue.

  • Statement should reflect your personality and values.

  • Show how an event or person had impact on your life.

  • Don't write an autobiography

  • Include your name and social security number on your essay.

  • Make a copy for your records.

Mini Sample:

Generic
I have been a member of the National Honor Society for the past two years and the Honor Roll as well. I was captain of the tennis team my senior year and made All-County Honorable Mention. During the summer I traveled to Europe and went to tennis camp. I presently have an after–school job at the Happy Hamburger so that I can save money for college. I understand that Generic University has an excellent program in Carpeting Design. I am looking forward to pursuing a career in this field and am confident that Generic will give me the best preparation.

Specific
My summer vacation changed my life. This past summer I had the opportunity of touring France and viewing medieval tapestries at various museums with my high school French class. My fascination with their color, design, and history has piqued my interest in a career in carpeting design. I have selected courses that would prepare me for this major at Generic University and have become a museum volunteer in my spare time. While I enjoy a variety of school activities from varsity tennis to the National Honor Society, my summer adventure has given me greater focus on my priorities. I am looking forward to pursuing my goal at Generic University.